2023 Moon Viewing Haiku Contest Results
By Michael Dylan Welch
Judged on Friday, September 1st by David Berger and Michael Dylan Welch . Judged on Saturday, September 2nd by Terran Campbell and Michael Dylan Welch
Friday submission: 88
Saturday submission: 105
Total submission: 193
Saturday, September 2, 2023
First Place
too bright
for eyes to receive
the hole in the darkness
Nigel Wylie
Second Place
the flute’s song trills
across the water before me—
can the moon hear it?
Barbara Segal
Third Place
a twinge of pain—
my body imperfect as
the waning gibbous
Meghan Sinoff
Honorable Mentions
(in alphabetical order by last name)
an imagined moon
phases unseen still matter
the glow behind trees
Megan Benoy
the face of the moon
language once again
at our foolishness
Kim Buehlman
like falling leaves, koi rise up
to kiss the rippling face
of the autumn moon
Carmen Edwards
the moon rises
late to the party
holiday weekend vacation
James Gibson
breath through bamboo
points to the shining moon—
a branch snaps
Matthew Grohne
I look for the moon
in the darkening eastern sky,
hoping for a glint
Hazel Hahn
moon viewing, they said
but not a sliver of light
only hungry stars
Dan Oestreich
the moon’s light
a night in September
could only be compared to you
Rachel Vaney
life is sweet
feet in grass, moon out
just relax and nap
Andy Weinstein
moon and lanterns glow—
sweet music fills the air tonight
Hello September!
Emerita Wheeling
summer ends
cool breeze at night
the moon greets us
Ellen Wijisman
Friday, September 1, 2023
First Place
this moon, as easy
to view from anywhere else—
and yet here we are
Grace Wallis
Second Place
awake before the dew
moonlight shows me all
but your face
Pat Atadero
Third Place
the sun set—
the bird sings
to remember tonight
Sherry Tang
Honorable Mentions
(in alphabetical order by last name)
the sun has set
do I shiver from the chill
or the shakuhachi?
Joyce Atadero
moon lights pale blue sky
still conifers listening
a flute plays softly
Kathleen Fujino Allison
surrounded by a wall of green
the still pond reflects
moon lantern glow
Valicia Boschek
when I go home,
the moon goes with me
and my shadow follows
Bob Brown
a rabbit above
two lovers in the moonlight
the night is warm
Julia Fox
dragonfly circles
my friend things about butt cheeks
the full moon rises
Maria Kute
crystal moon beams
light my steps
guiding me home
Amber Mersino
what do you know, moon?
the future? the past? right now?
I curl back to sleep
Rebecca Noran
tea ceremony—
small round cake
calls to the moon
Paul Pietromonaco
awaiting my wish
a coin in the pond
shines from above!
Bez Palmer
show me the way home
a lantern in the night sky
my silent lover
John Reese
clouds pass the full moon—
wind blows the leaves off the willow
the water shivers
Johnny Xue